The problems that I have had with my laptop is that at first the charger would not turn on. When it wouldn’t work I went to Mr.Schaefer and he tried to make it work. Once I got to G period my laptop was there charging.
My second problem was that my computer would just randomly fall asleep and it would take me a long time to wake it up. I told Mr.Schaefer and he told me to give it to him. I gave it to him and he took it away and let me use a substitute computer. The next day he came and told me that he gave me a new computer.
My third problem was that the newest charger that Mr.Schaefer gave me would not work either. The chargers that I had had were the new type. After I told Mrs.Donnelly about my problem with my charger she told Mr.Schaefer and he gave me one of the old chargers.
This is both humorous and serious at the same time. I like how you blogged about the problems with your computer, as just about everyone in the class knows about it. But you wrote this personally, which I like other than something like “yesterday Mariana had to get a new charger”, whereas you wrote it like “My third problem was that the newest charger…”. I like your writing and hope you continue to blog.
Oh my! I sure hope your laptop is working better now!
My laptop is way better now. Thank you guys for commenting on my post it makes me feel really good.