This is my review on 2011. I am going to tell you about one thing that happened in 2011. My topic is Steve Jobs. Steve Jobs was a very good man that changed our world today. He started out dropping out of school and working with his friend his own garage. Their first invention was called the Apple 1. And his great inventions carried on until now. Steve made a big impact on my life by making computer using easier and instead of the computer doing what it wants, it does what you want. Steve Jobs has made us feel like technology feel like we can treat it as your best friends.
Did you know that he was half arab? His biological dad was arab and though they knew each other they avoided each other. I think that you could have written a bit more. Just a little.