9 Responses

  1. 18marianar at |

    Your story always makes me want to read more and more it’s so good.

  2. 18marianar at |

    You have to post more! I need to read more!!

  3. 18camb at |

    This is by far the best story that I have ever read by a sixth grader. Also, good luck in the GeoBee!

  4. 18matthewf at |

    Josh,
    I really like the writing! I can’t stop reading it!

  5. 18matthewf at |

    Thanks Josh. That really makes it a lot more sense.

  6. 18ashwins at |

    Great story, please continue with it! What would be really interesting, is if you add a surprising twist, I would give you a suggestion for a surprising twist but then it wouldn’t be a surprise.

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