Hello! I’m out with chapter 2 in my new story. WARNING: Very funny. I hope you like it. Please give me feedback so that I know how to make it better.
Chapter 2 – Matthias the Crazy Dude
By the way, I forgot to tell you I have another brother. His name is Matthias, which is basically Matthew, which is my name so I am NOT that happy about it… still, he is awesome. We might go on a journey but we don’t have an itinerary because Matthias isn’t very fecund. I found that out maybe 10 years ago, when I was 2!!! Wow, how impossible… I can’t forget about my neighbor drawing on my chalk… I HATED that considering I was 2. Also, a few weeks ago, we filmed Celtic Ocean and Matthias played the triangle, and it was CACOPHONOUS!!! It was so bad, it was formidable! It almost caused inclement weather! It was the complete opposite of dexterous!!! Anyways, when Matthias decided to come in and be the king in The Voyage, he was dressed in an outfit so gossamer when he walked onstage, you could see his ribs he is so emaciated! When he made an amalgam, it nearly blew up the house! How facinating! Also, when he made an archetype of a tall building, it fell on the paper in 2-D! How did that happen? I don’t know. All I know is that Matthias is a COMPLETE dude.
Don’t say I didn’t tell you it was funny.
I liked this story, it was very interesting.
That was really funny, but you used some of the words wrong. Other than that, good job!
Cole,
I’m just wondering, which words do you think I used wrong? I would love to make my writing better.