Story Feedback by David


Lately, Davi, Ryan, and I have been writing a story called Diamond Ages. We have posted the prologue, and I am looking for feedback about the story so I can tell my co-writers what people say. Please comment, so we can improve our work. We hope to post the first chapter soon! Thanks for everyone commenting on the prologue!






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