5 Responses

  1. 18jamesfh at |

    I really liked the story. It was confusing at parts. I see you made some mistakes with capitalization. I might be wrong, but did you mean James said ‘We need to execute them’ and not ‘executive?’

  2. 18moshei at |

    I like the story but I am confused on what is happening.

  3. matthew at |

    I edited this a little.

    It’s a lot better.

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