I have had a pretty crazy break, complete with lots of free time and days with friends. Over winter break, not only have I found time to read, but I have read 4 or five new books. During break I did not find time to write, and I am disappointed. “Me Job” has stuttered to a halt, and I’m sure Drew and Rian are bored waiting in a hotel in Chicago, so I need to get going. Does anyone have any criticisms about my writing? What can I do better? I really really enjoy when someone comments on my post. Sometimes, I’ll wake up early to see if someone has. If I get a few more comments, maybe I’ll post the last few chapters.
What was your winter break like? Image from flickrcc
Your story is amazing but I find it a bit predictable at this point. I think that you might want to add a twist or a surprise. Whatever direction that Me Job goes in you should keep writing.
Josh,
I really like Me Job, and I really want you to post the last few chapters. I like how in this blog post you said that Drew and Rian are bored at the hotel in Chicago… I found that pretty funny.