Last week in LA we had a cool list of vocabulary words so I wrote a paragraph with them. Here it is.
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Julia and Lizzie are votaries of dance. When Julia’s mother tried to get her to stop dancing and try gymnastics she was recalcitrant. Dance is quite salutary and that’s part of why Julia and Lizzie like it. Before they started dancing Lizzie was pretty much a pariah and so was Julia. Lizzie and Julia had entered in a dance competition. As they walked to the dance competion on monday afternoon they decided to transpose the dance moves done in the chorus with the moves done at the beginning. To get to the dance gym you have to cross a tributary and they were so engrossed in the discussion of the dance routine that they almost tripped on the bridge. There was a polyglot sign in front of the gym with the text in english, french and spanish advertising the competition. The dance routine was scintillating. Everyone elso was so good that Lizzie and Julia had a difficult time keeping their sangfroid. In the end they won. Julia and Lizzie gave their remuneration to a charity that protects endangered animals.
I like how you used the words in a way that makes sense, instead of jumbling the together randomly!
Great job! It’s like a story.
Each vocabulary word fit into place like a puzzle piece. I hope you write more!