3 Responses

  1. 18jamesfh at |

    This sounds really interesting. I like how you used vocabulary words in your story about Crimson. I noticed in some parts you forgot periods and capitalizations.

  2. 18oliviac at |

    Your story is really good! You made some spelling mistakes. I like how you used the vocabulary words.

  3. 18camb at |

    Yeah, James is right about that. I think you should just keep going because it’s sounding great.

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