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  1. 18gusl at |

    I really like the idea of showing Jonas the ocean. I think it’s time he sees more water than the river that connects his community with another (supposedly). I also think he needs to know about the beach as well. Nice post!

  2. 18osezeleo at |

    Well said Ashwin nothing like the peaceful ocean to represent the outdoors.

  3. Rod P at |

    I agree. Your idea was good. I liked it. Although, personally I think you should describe it more.
    Still, I liked it.

    Rod P

    PS: Why did nobody look or comment on my post? 🙁

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